Audience feedback: final film

I asked 10 young adults/ teenagers about what they thought of mine and Kate's two minute opening and I got a range of different answers. I showed a number of my friends my opening and then asked them what they thought. All of them said that they would want to go and see it at the cinema and they thought that it looked like a proper film that would be in the cinemas. They also said that there was suspense all throughout the two minutes and the cliff-hanger left the audience wanting to watch the rest of the film. One of my fiends asked about the scientist because he did look very suspicious having a dead body in his cupboard and setting up for an experiment. Some of my target audience didn't even ask and they said there are many different opportunities for the plot synopsis'. I also asked older people to look at my film and they thought that it looked very professional and thought that the editing was very good and they were impressed with he quality of work I created. they also said that they would go and see it at the cinema to find out what happens also because the plot was very intriguing 

My target audience said that the only thing that would make it better is if there was more hints that the scientist was the evil mastermind behind it all. For example, if he looked at the camera and smiled like he had completed his experiment with he dead girl. They also said that the camera quality could have been better but we only had access to the school cameras not anything better than a small camera. But overall my target audience liked the opening a lot and said they can see the real cinema qualities in my film.